MEST 1 Feedback

WWW:

You make plenty of good points but now we need to develop them into detailed and developed answers. 

EBI:

Most important- Answer the question! You use plenty of media language in the forms question but don't mention narrative at all so you will lose marks. You need to write more in 60mins and also work on institution. Far more notes will help!

As a result of this feedback I will have to work on my note taking so that I can get key information down quickly but also make sure that the information copied down is effective and useful and also will have to remember to link the question back to the narrative if asked for, for the forms question in the may exam. 

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Shot List

Shot List

Producers: Khaleed, Alieu and Arvinder

Production: "Jumped"

Shot No.	Shot Type	Details of Shot	Timing
1	Establishing shot	shot of the estate	0.02
2	High angle shot	of the roads cars driving past	0.03
3	Close up of the estate door	of the estate doors	0.02
4	low angle establishing shot	introducing the main character.	0.01
5	tracking shot- camera going up	showing what the main character is wearing and how he looks.	0.03
6	over the shoulder shot	The character walking towards the block	0.01
7	wide shot from the side	heading towards the block	0.01
8	close up tracking shot	camera moves around his head looking worried.	0.03
9	high angle shot	his hand going to his pocket	0.02
10	camera low below hip	taking his phone out of his pocket.	0,02
11	Close up	of the time on his phone	0.01
12	extreme close up	reaction of his face looking scared	0.02
13	over the shoulder	of the character approaching the stairs.	0.02
14	Close up	again looking at the reaction of his face.	0.01
15	wide shot of inside the block in front of the doors.	This shot we see him opening the door.	0.02
16	High angle shot from the top of the stairs	this shot shows how worried he is.	0.03
17	low angle shot from the bottom of the stairs.	Stepping up the stairs slowly	0.02
18	side wide shot	walking up the stairs	0.02
19	over the shoulder shot	walking up the stairs	0.03
20	close up	showing the face of the main actors face	0.03
21	Tracking shot	Main actor pulling his zip up	0.03
22	Close up	pulling up his hood	0.01
23	over the shoulder shot	walking down the hallway	0.02
24	side tracking shot	walking down the hallway	0.03
25	wide shot	coming to the edge of the hallway	0.02
26	establishing shot	introducing the other actor	0.02
27	over the shoulder	from the worried actors point of view	0.03
28	over the shoulder	from the one standing waiting	0.02
29	wide shot	when they bump into each other	0.02
30	high angle shot from the point of view	The other one falls down	0.03
31	Long shot	Of him  running away	0.02
32	close up	The older person putting his hood up	0.03
33	medium shot	of him walking away	0.02
34	tracking shot	the man walking down	0.03
35	close up	looking left and right looking worried	0.03
36	long shot	The man turning around and is up for a bang as he gets pushed to the floor	0.04
37	low angle shot	2 men in black masks running towards the man	0.03
38	High angle shot	two men beating him up	0.05
39	medium shot	the 2 men taking the bag	0.03
40	long shot from the edge	the 2 men running away with the bag	0.04
41	High angle shot	Andre helpless and hurt	0.03
42	wide shot	Andre getting up	0.03
43	wide shot	His hand going to the pocket	0.02
44	close up of the phone	this shot we see his wife	0.02
45	close up	Andre crying	0.03
46	close up of the phone	dialling 999	0.02
47	extreme close up	him on the phone	0.03
48	close up	him turning around and getting punched and the phone drops	0.03
49	Black out	black out	0.03
50	over the shoulder shot	approaching someone leaning over a balcony	0.03
51	over the shoulder from Rashaun	Andre Saying "yo"	0.02
52	over the shoulder from Andre	Rashaun saying "What you got for me"	0.02
53	over the shoulder from Rashaun	Andre saying "nothing fam just came to chat to you quick. I want out I cant deal with this no more.	0.03
54	over the shoulder from andre	*Laughing* why you moving shook? All right you have to do one more big favour for me thoe then you can cut .	0.03
55	over the shoulder from rashaun	ANDRE Say nothing last one yh	0.02
56	close up tracking	Andre walking away	0.03
57	below hip shot	Rashaun taking out his phone	0.02
58	close up of the phone	Rashaun calling someone	0.02
59	close up	RASHUAN get on the phone and commands some one to beat up ANDRE and get the drugs of him so ANDRE could be in his debt for a long time.	0.03
60	wide shot	Rashaun putting the phone down	0.04
61	Black out	Black out	0.03